Please do something手机已经成为一种新的毒品

叶凝云

作者：叶凝云　日期：2013-10-23　原文地址：http://www.skywj.com/thread-9259-1-1.html


As the growth of information technology,the number of Phubbing,chinese word "低头族",has been gathering stronger and bigger.The people is become inndifferent and snub with the mobile phone,especially smart phone,being wildly used.




The furthest distance in the world is It is when the murderer stand in front of you but you don't pay any heed to them.Last month,a sphomore student Justin Valdez had been killed when he is on the subway, in San Francisco.The monitor of the subway show that the murderer took out of his gun several times before the murder.But the shame is that all the people sitten beside who are all keep their eyes on their phone and didn't notice the murder.

The same things happened on the subway, in the shops,supermarket,for instance.The time of stop being a phubbing is coming.The world should be filled with love not distance.
(please help me with my grammer and such thanksO(∩_∩)O~)

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Lynette 发表于 2013-10-26 13:41
亲，写得挺好的，不过确实有点小建议之类的

什么建议？

叶凝云

Lynette 发表于 2013-10-27 18:20
With the growth of information technology,the number of Phubbing,Chinese word "低头族",has been gett ...

对了吗？

叶凝云

Lynette 发表于 2013-10-27 23:25
应该差不多了吧

thxO(∩_∩)O~

叶凝云

better 发表于 2013-11-3 14:52
我也是低头族，喜欢玩手机，都没见出事，O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

那是中国人没有枪啊O(∩_∩)O~